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    subhajit123 is offline Banned
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    Red face I was waiting for your reply.

    Please correct my writing below:

    1. "I was waiting for your reply for a long time. I am so glad to have received your message finally. Thanks for sharing your thought with me. Honestly, I'm so worrying about you. I really want to see you and talk to you directly. Should we meet some time this week? If it's possible, suggest a date, time ad place for me."

    2. "Promise me, don't hurt yourself"

    3. "Release yourself to hear the real voice in your hurt. You don't have to pretend to be strong."
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    Re: I was waiting for your reply.

    Quote Originally Posted by subhajit123 View Post
    Please correct my writing below:

    1. "I was have been waiting for your reply for a long time. I am so glad to have finally received your message​. finally. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me. Honestly, I'm so worrying worried about you. I really want to see you and talk to you directly. Should Can we meet some time this week? If it's possible, suggest a date, time and place. for me."


    2. "Promise me (no comma here) don't [that] you won't hurt yourself."


    3. "Release yourself to hear the real voice in your hurt. I don't understand this sentence at all.

    You don't have to pretend to be strong."
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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