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    khurdull is offline Newbie
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    Making sentence with 3 actions.

    1. I sent my money from my another bank account to another.
    2. I sent my money via wire-transfer
    3. It has not delivered yet.

    so i made this : The money i sent from my another bank account to another via wire-transfer have not delivered yet

    I find this sentence very unnatural but making perfect sentence is beyond my ability. i need your help .. please help me...

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    Re: Making sentence with 3 actions.

    I believe wire transfers always go from one bank account to another. Thus you can simplify the sentence: I think the money I sent by wire transfer hasn't been delivered yet.
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    Re: Making sentence with 3 actions.

    Quote Originally Posted by khurdull View Post
    1. I sent my money from my another bank account to another.
    2. I sent my money via wire-transfer.
    3. It has not been delivered yet.

    so I made wrote this: The money I sent from my another bank account to another via wire-transfer have has not been delivered yet

    I find this sentence very unnatural but making writing a perfect sentence is beyond my ability. I need your help. Please help me.
    See my corrections above. It's important to follow these rules of written English at all times:

    - Start every sentence with a capital letter.
    - End every sentence with one appropriate punctuation mark.
    - Always capitalise the word "I".

    You used "my another" twice. Note that there is no context in which that is correct.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Making sentence with 3 actions.

    Thank you emsr2d2. The explanation came very clear to me. :)

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