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    britfan is offline Junior Member
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    outbreak of war

    Please proofread the following text below. Thanks.

    Until the outbreak of the war, I had maintained an exchange of letters with him, always stressing that a military conflict would be bad for everyone involved.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 06-Sep-2017 at 21:15. Reason: Fixed formatting problem

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    andrewg927 is offline Senior Member
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    Re: outbreak of war

    Just remember don't break it off mid sentence.

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Re: outbreak of war

    Instead of an exchange of letters, you could just say a correspondence.

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