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    ditto2016 is offline Just Joined
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    Thumbs up Help with proofreading

    Hey guys, I am a proofreader for a CV writing company and need some help please.
    I am Afrikaans born and raised and sometimes the English proofreading gets me stuck.
    Please help me to make sure this sentence is correct:
    His in-depth understanding of his function, as well as his leadership qualities, professional integrity and pleasant personality make him a very valuable team player.
    Thank you guys

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    Re: Help with proofreading

    Hello ditto2016, and welcome to the forum.

    Quote Originally Posted by ditto2016 View Post
    His in-depth understanding of his function
    That's the only bit I would likely change. What do you mean by "his function"? What does that person do?

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Re: Help with proofreading

    His role?

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