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    At the wedding, people enjoyed

    I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

    At the wedding, people enjoyed themselves but for the bride, who was downcast and didn't touch either her drink or food. She seemed to become invisible. No one paid her any attention or talked to her.

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    Re: At the wedding, people enjoyed

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

    At the wedding, people everyone enjoyed themselves but for except the bride, who was downcast and didn't touch either her drink or food. She seemed to become be invisible. No one paid her any attention or talked to her.
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: At the wedding, people enjoyed

    I would use "food or drink" and connect the last two sentences with an appropriate conjunction.

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