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    IELTS GT Writing Task 1

    Hello, everyone!

    I'm practicing to write letters for the IELTS exam and I would appreciate it if you could check my writing task. Task:

    You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.

    Write a letter to this friend. In your letter

    - give details of your study plans
    - explain why you want to get a part-time job
    - suggest how your friend could help you find a job

    Dear John,

    I hope you're well, I'm writing to ask for your help to find some job for me as I'm going to study in your country.

    A week ago I was informed that I'd passed exams of your local university and now I can apply for study course. My main subject will be Marketing Relationships and the course will start very soon. Also I've already found an accomodation for the first time. However, I couldn't find any job opportunity for students from abroad.

    The thing I have to do some job is to save my family budget. Plane tickets wasn't the cheapest and also I have to pay for my apartment I've chosen to stay in. So, that is the thing which I need you to help with.

    Unfortunately, seeking job by the Internet I haven't got a success. Perhaps, you could ask some local shops for the student job. I can do everything they need but only after my study hours. I would be really thankful if you help me.

    Take care and write back soon.

    Best wishes,

    Dima

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    Re: IELTS GT Writing Task 1

    Quote Originally Posted by Curiosity View Post
    Hello, everyone!

    I'm practicing to write writing letters for the IELTS exam and I would appreciate it if you could check my writing task.

    Task: You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.

    Write a letter to this friend. In your letter

    - give details of your study plans
    - explain why you want to get a part-time job
    - suggest how your friend could help you find a job



    Dear John,

    I hope you're well. I'm writing to ask for your help to find in finding me some a part-time job for me as I'm going to study in your country [name of country].

    A week ago, I was informed that I'd passed the entrance exams of for your local university and now I can apply I've been given a place for on a study course. My main subject will be Marketing Relationships and the course will start very soon. Also I've already found an accommodation. for the first time. However, I couldn't find haven't found any job opportunites for students from abroad.

    The thing I have to do some job is get a job to save help my family's budget. The plane tickets wasn't weren't the cheapest cheap and also I have to pay rent for my the apartment. I've chosen to stay in. So, that is the thing which I need your to help with finding a job.

    Unfortunately, seeking looking for a job by the internet I haven't got a hasn't been successful. you Could you ask at/in some local shops for the to see if they have any student part-time jobs for a student? I can do everything anything they need but I can work only after my study hours I finish studying every day. I would be really thankful grateful if you would help me.

    Take care and write back soon.

    Best wishes,

    Dima
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