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    sanjfer is offline Junior Member
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    can you please clear this memo

    To: All employees,

    It has been observed that some employees are habitual in requesting cash advance every month. This practice will not be entertained anymore. The cash advance will be paid to the employee only on emergency financial circumstances.

    For your information and strict compliance.

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    emsr2d2 is offline Moderator
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    Re: can you please clear this memo

    Quote Originally Posted by sanjfer View Post
    To: All employees ​(no comma here)

    It has been observed noticed that some employees are habitually in requesting a cash advance. every month. This practice will not no longer be entertained/permitted. anymore. The Cash advances will be paid to the employees only on in an emergency. financial circumstances.

    For your information and strict compliance.
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    tedmc is offline VIP Member
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    Re: can you please clear this memo

    Would the plural "cash advances" in the first sentence be better since we are talking about employees?
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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