newkeenlearner
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Could you please check this paragraph to make it sound more natural and more advanced? I think it is so simple.
For years, advertising has had considerable influence/effect on people’s shopping choices. Most brand names have frequent ads on TV to make their consumers loyal to their brands. I suppose that, in my country, almost all ads are closely related to food and drink, and at times they all look and sound the same to me.
Nestle, which is a Swiss multinational food and beverage company, has the most frequent and also the best advertisements on TV. Its advertising slogan is “ if you want to make coin, you must spend coin”. As far as I know, the company has paid off since its advertising campaign was mounted a very long time ago. You know, the directors of this company’s ads must be so creative and bursting with new ideas that/because they always come up with something completely new, innovative and interesting. For years, this company has tries to create a variety of reliable, family, and healthy images for its products, and it is really expert at it.
Besides, this company often uses celebrities to promote and publicize its products. It seems to me that such people can help grab most viewer’s attention. There were many people whom I knew were easily persuaded by this kind of ads. Furthermore, most of the ads of this company are filmed/shot in a mountainous region, heart of forest, or in the virtual world to be able to capture a television audience’s attention. All in all, the huge influences/effects of ads on people’s shopping choices cannot be neglected or ignored.
For years, advertising has had considerable influence/effect on people’s shopping choices. Most brand names have frequent ads on TV to make their consumers loyal to their brands. I suppose that, in my country, almost all ads are closely related to food and drink, and at times they all look and sound the same to me.
Nestle, which is a Swiss multinational food and beverage company, has the most frequent and also the best advertisements on TV. Its advertising slogan is “ if you want to make coin, you must spend coin”. As far as I know, the company has paid off since its advertising campaign was mounted a very long time ago. You know, the directors of this company’s ads must be so creative and bursting with new ideas that/because they always come up with something completely new, innovative and interesting. For years, this company has tries to create a variety of reliable, family, and healthy images for its products, and it is really expert at it.
Besides, this company often uses celebrities to promote and publicize its products. It seems to me that such people can help grab most viewer’s attention. There were many people whom I knew were easily persuaded by this kind of ads. Furthermore, most of the ads of this company are filmed/shot in a mountainous region, heart of forest, or in the virtual world to be able to capture a television audience’s attention. All in all, the huge influences/effects of ads on people’s shopping choices cannot be neglected or ignored.
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