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    Clive rolled up the sleeves of his shirt

    I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

    Clive rolled up the sleeves of his shirt, took a spade and started digging in his garden. The air was hot and humid and soon he bathed in sweat.

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    Re: Clive rolled up the sleeves of his shirt

    He rolled up his shirtsleeves. There's a word missing from the second sentence.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Clive rolled up the sleeves of his shirt

    Should say this?

    He bathed in the sweat.

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    Re: Clive rolled up the sleeves of his shirt

    No. Try again.
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    Re: Clive rolled up the sleeves of his shirt

    I believe I missed "be".

    He was bathed in sweat.
    Last edited by teechar; 24-Sep-2017 at 13:57. Reason: typo

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