sania-baharat
Member
- Joined
- Jul 10, 2017
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Urdu
- Home Country
- Pakistan
- Current Location
- Iran
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I suppose taking risks involve being a/the kind of person who has willingness to try different, new and sometimes adventurous things. When it comes to taking risks, I see myself as a risk taker. In fact, I am more of a risk taker than I used to be and I will be happy to take some risks in life. I think my attitude to risk has changed as I have gotten older. For example, I am more open to risking a change in my appearance because I think I’m less self-conscious now. I often change the hairstyle and color of my hair, but when I was younger I had the same hairstyle and color of hair for years and years. I also take risks to do things I enjoy doing, like traveling foreign countries alone or trying adrenaline-filled zip lining adventure. I have decided to further my study beyond the bachelor’s degree abroad as well, which really is worth risks involved and is the second biggest risk I am going to take in my life. I think some elements of risk probably makes life more enjoyable than it is. The first biggest risk I've ever taken was a professional one. After 5 years working for the same company and of having different job positions, I left and applied for a new job. Although I have a sense of adventure, as far as performing adventure sports concerned, such as skiing, sky diving, cliff jumping, there is not much room for risk in my life, because those activities even have fatal consequences.
I suppose taking risks involve being a/the kind of person who has willingness to try different, new and sometimes adventurous things. When it comes to taking risks, I see myself as a risk taker. In fact, I am more of a risk taker than I used to be and I will be happy to take some risks in life. I think my attitude to risk has changed as I have gotten older. For example, I am more open to risking a change in my appearance because I think I’m less self-conscious now. I often change the hairstyle and color of my hair, but when I was younger I had the same hairstyle and color of hair for years and years. I also take risks to do things I enjoy doing, like traveling foreign countries alone or trying adrenaline-filled zip lining adventure. I have decided to further my study beyond the bachelor’s degree abroad as well, which really is worth risks involved and is the second biggest risk I am going to take in my life. I think some elements of risk probably makes life more enjoyable than it is. The first biggest risk I've ever taken was a professional one. After 5 years working for the same company and of having different job positions, I left and applied for a new job. Although I have a sense of adventure, as far as performing adventure sports concerned, such as skiing, sky diving, cliff jumping, there is not much room for risk in my life, because those activities even have fatal consequences.