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    A Malaysian Movie, Abang Long Fadil

    Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

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    In this sequel, Fadil falls into the mafia world, mastered by Taji Samprit and his son Wak Doyok. A certain incident leads Fadil to be mistaken as mercenary killer known as Tiger by the Police. Now, the only way Fadil can clear his name is if he reveals Tiger`s true identity.

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    Fadil who is mistaken as Tiger, a professional assassin has to lead life as one to prove his innocence. He also attempts to reveal Tiger's true identity.

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    Re: A Malaysian Movie, Abang Long Fadil

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaya87 View Post
    Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

    Long Summary
    In this sequel, Fadil falls into the mafia world, mastered by Taji Samprit and his son Wak Doyok. A certain incident leads Fadil to be mistaken as a mercenary killer known as Tiger by the police. Now, the only way Fadil can clear his name is if he reveals Tiger`s true identity.

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    Fadil who is mistaken for Tiger, a professional assassin has to lead a life as a professional assassin to prove his innocence. He also attempts to reveal Tiger's true identity.
    I would say "uncovers" instead of "reveals" and "uncover" instead of "reveal".

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