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    Peter went out for a few pints

    I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

    Peter went out for a few pints, but woke in a ditch the next morning without remembering anything from the previous evening. He blamed the memory loss on the bad quality of beer, which chemistry must have affected his brain cells.

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    Re: Peter went out for a few pints

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

    Peter went out for a few pints, but woke in a ditch the next morning without remembering anything from with no memory of the previous evening. He blamed the memory loss it on the bad quality of beer, which chemistry the makeup/ingredients of which must have affected his brain cells.
    See above. I imagine Peter knows he is just deluding himself - it was nothing to do with the quality of the beer, just the quantity!
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Peter went out for a few pints

    '... the bad quality if the beer, which whose chemistry ...'

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