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    After Bob graduated from university

    I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

    After Bob graduated from university with the diploma in philosophy, he was upset that the only job he could find was in a restaurant kitchen. There, scrubbing pots, pants and plates, and peeling and cutting potatoes, onions and carrots, he wondered what famous philosophers would have said about his sad fate.

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    Re: After Bob graduated from university

    - Again, consider "a diploma" if this is the first instance of it.
    - I would use "in the kitchen of a restaurant" or "as a kitchen hand in a restaurant".
    - Note "scrubbing pans".

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    Re: After Bob graduated from university

    One usually graduates from university with a degree. A diploma is considerably less prestigious.

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    Re: After Bob graduated from university

    In the United States, graduating high school students receive a diploma. Every attainment after that is a ​degree.
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: After Bob graduated from university

    How about technical/trades qualifications gained post high school?

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