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    Question Please help me to correct this letter

    Hello everyone,

    I received a rejection letter from a university to my application,

    Dear xxxxx

    Unfortunately we have had to withdraw your offer for the xxxx London campus and also reject your application for the xxxx campus. This is due to the fact that we are unable to find an exact comparison for your qualifications from xxxxx. A NARIC enquiry was made so that we can be sure that this is the correct decision. Sorry for any inconvenience this may have caused.

    Kind Regards

    And here's my response

    Dear xxxxxx,

    Thanks for letting me know about your decision.
    Actually, I’m surprised at the rejection of my application, especially the reason given was the unable comparison of my qualifications,
    I think that the decision was little hasty, because I have already received an email (which I included in these email) from another university, before I know the xxxxxxx university, that confirm my qualifications equitation to British degree standards.
    I would therefore humbly request you to reconsider y application on behave of the reasons i provided. I will however respect your decision.
    I am looking forward for a positive reply
    Best regards,

    So, please help me to correct this letter, thanks.
    Last edited by teechar; 04-Oct-2017 at 16:01. Reason: removed links

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    Re: Please help me to correct this letter

    Dear xxxxxx,

    Thanks for your letter letting me know about your decision.
    Actually, Im surprised at the rejection of my application, especially the reason given was the unable comparison of that you are unable to find a match for my qualifications,
    I think that the decision was little hasty, because I have already received an email (which I included in these this email) from another university, before I know the xxxxxxx university, that confirm my calcification equitation to British degree standards.
    I would therefore humbly request you to reconsider my application on behave the basis of the reasons i provided. I will however respect your decision.
    I am looking forward for to a positive reply.

    Best regards,

    What do you mean by the underlined words?
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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    Re: Please help me to correct this letter

    Quote Originally Posted by tedmc View Post
    Dear xxxxxx,

    Thanks for your letter letting me know about your decision.
    Actually, I’m surprised at the rejection of my application, especially the reason given was the unable comparison of that you are unable to find a match for my qualifications,
    I think that the decision was little hasty, because I have already received an email (which I included in these this email) from another university, before I know the xxxxxxx university, that confirm my calcification equitation to British degree standards.
    I would therefore humbly request you to reconsider my application on behave the basis of the reasons i provided. I will however respect your decision.
    I am looking forward for to a positive reply.

    Best regards,

    What do you mean by the underlined words?
    Hello Tedmc,
    Thank you for your corrections,

    especially mean in particular the reason of qualifications.

    Hasty : done or acting the decision with excessive speed, because they give the decision until they get confirmation from NARIC about my qualifications .
    confirm my calcification equitation : sorry this was error, it’s confirm my qualifications equitation

    thanks in again.

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    Re: Please help me to correct this letter

    Sorry,maildor, I did not mean to have "especially"underlined.
    You still have not explained what "confirm my calcification(biological term?) equitation" is.
    Last edited by tedmc; 04-Oct-2017 at 18:15.
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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    Re: Please help me to correct this letter

    Quote Originally Posted by tedmc View Post
    Sorry,maildor, I did not mean to have "especially"underlined.
    You still have not explained what "confirm my calcification(biological term?) equitation" is.
    sorry Tedmc it was an error, it’s confirm my qualifications equitation.

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    Re: Please help me to correct this letter

    Quote Originally Posted by maildor View Post
    sorry Tedmc it was an error, it’s confirm my qualifications equitation.
    I have just learned a new word - equitation.
    It is "the art and practice of horsemanship and horse riding". Is that what you mean?
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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    Re: Please help me to correct this letter

    Quote Originally Posted by tedmc View Post
    I have just learned a new word - equitation.
    It is "the art and practice of horsemanship and horse riding". Is that what you mean?
    Oh my God, absolutely not this, I mean they have acknowledged my qualifications.

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    Re: Please help me to correct this letter

    Did you mean something like "equivalency"?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Please help me to correct this letter

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    Did you mean something like "equivalency"?
    Yes EMSR2D2, exactly that.

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