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  1. #1
    sanjfer is offline Junior Member
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    Please correct this

    By this letter, I want to clarify the managementís expectations of you for your interaction in the workplace with seniors. You must present any justified criticisms or comments in a sensitive, courteous, and respectful manner. Speaking loudly and/or angrily to senior staff will not be tolerated. Professionalism including professional courtesy and sensitivity is an essential component of your position as supervisor.

    Mr....., this is a warning for you Any further unprofessional behavior by you will not be tolerated; and if you treat any senior staff with disrespect, you will receive further disciplinary action up to and including the possibility of termination.

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    tedmc is online now VIP Member
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    Re: Please correct this

    It does not look like a letter. And I think the first paragraph is unnecessarily wordy.
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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