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sanjfer

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By this letter, I want to clarify the management’s expectations of you for your interaction in the workplace with seniors. You must present any justified criticisms or comments in a sensitive, courteous, and respectful manner. Speaking loudly and/or angrily to senior staff will not be tolerated. Professionalism including professional courtesy and sensitivity is an essential component of your position as supervisor.

Mr....., this is a warning for you Any further unprofessional behavior by you will not be tolerated; and if you treat any senior staff with disrespect, you will receive further disciplinary action up to and including the possibility of termination.
 

tedmc

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It does not look like a letter. And I think the first paragraph is unnecessarily wordy.
 
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