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    Many poultry producers inject

    I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct. I believe my second sentence is not good, but I was unable to correct it myself.

    Many poultry producers inject chicken meat with salt water, which they justify by claiming it makes meat tastier. But consumers are not convinced in the true aim of this method and believe this is the way of cheating, because they are actually paying for a large amount of water instead of meat.

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    Re: Many poultry producers inject

    Consumers are not convinced by this explanation, and believe the producers are simply conning us into paying for more water and less meat.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Many poultry producers inject

    Or:

    But consumers are not convinced that is the true motive. They suspect the producers just want to make bigger profits.

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    Re: Many poultry producers inject

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    claiming it makes the (chicken) meat tastier.
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    Re: Many poultry producers inject

    It's a way to cheat. There are many ways, of which this is only one.
    I am not a teacher.

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