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    sania-baharat is offline Member
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    a friend of mine celebrated his birthday last Saturday evening.

    Are these two sentences OK?

    I’m going to talk about the service we received in a restaurant where a friend of mine celebrated his birthday last Saturday evening.


    I’m going to talk about the service we received in a restaurant which a friend of mine celebrated his birthday last Saturday evening in.

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    Re: a friend of mine celebrated his birthday last Saturday evening.

    I’m going to talk about the service we received at the restaurant where/at which a friend of mine celebrated his birthday last Saturday evening.
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: a friend of mine celebrated his birthday last Saturday evening.

    Thanks.
    We say "at a restaurant" not "in a restayrant".
    I’m going to talk about the service we received in a restaurant
    that a friend of mine celebrated his birthday last Saturday evening at.

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    Re: a friend of mine celebrated his birthday last Saturday evening.

    Use Matthew's suggestion (with "where").

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    Re: a friend of mine celebrated his birthday last Saturday evening.

    Quote Originally Posted by sania-baharat View Post
    I’m going to talk about the service we received in a restaurant that a friend of mine celebrated his birthday last Saturday evening at.
    At gets a bit lost here. I would move it to after his birthday.

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