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    LiteracyLover is offline Newbie
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    Commas

    I would greatly appreciate some help with a question about commas.

    In the following sentence, should there be a comma after the first three words? ("Mowat believes that,")

    Version 1: Mowat believes that, despite the income-based nature of the tax, the premium will disproportionately affect lower-income families who already pay for prescriptions at their own cost.

    Version 2: Mowat believes that despite the income-based nature of the tax, the premium will disproportionately affect lower-income families who already pay for prescriptions at their own cost (Kusch and Gerster).

    I understand that commas can be used to set off a dependent clause, IF the dependent clause is nonessential, but I feel lost in applying this rule to this sentence. I would be very grateful for guidance.
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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Re: Commas

    I would use both commas.

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