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    Kate_Dinh is offline Just Joined
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    Smile Could you help me correct my letter about memory course to get high scor. Many thanks

    There is advertisement for a course designed to help improve your memory.
    Write a letter to the organizers of the course. In the letter
    • Give some background information about yourself
    • Explain your own problems and why you would like to do the course
    • Inquire about the methods used on the course
    • Enquire about course fees and dates
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    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am writing to enquire about some information of your course which was built to improve memory. I am a supervisor in a bank currently; my work requires me to remember correctly many things involve in interest rates, service fees, maturity date of deposits; but I often forget many tasks that I have to do for my customers.

    Let me explain my situation. Although I use a note book to take note, or I tried to use mind maps to memorise a lot of things but they are not effective for me. I have recently forgot a important task that I have to do; as a result, there were a lot of problems that happened to me. That is the reason why I would like to join your course.

    Would you kindly send me about your methods that could help me to improve my memory; and I am very grateful if you could give me its fee, the beginning date as well.
    I look forward to your reply.

    Yours faithfully.
    Kate
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 13-Oct-2017 at 18:50. Reason: Enlarged font to make post readable

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    Rover_KE is offline Moderator
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    Re: Could you help me correct my letter about memory course to get high scor. Many th

    Sorry, Kate. We don't correct students' assignments before their teachers have seen them.

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    teechar is offline Moderator
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    Re: Could you help me correct my letter about memory course to get high scor. Many th

    Hello Kate_Dinh, and welcome to the forum.
    Can you tell us where you found that exercise please?

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