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    Red face Choose a natural disaster

    Hi!I m preparing a final project for ESL students.Im not a teacher yet.Could you give me a hand?This will be the task (for the students):
    TASK:
    CHOOSE A NATURAL DISASTER
    DESIGN AN INFOGRAPHIC. IT SHOULD INCLUDE ADVICE ON WHAT TO DO IF THE DISASTER HAPPENS IN YOUR CITY .
    Is there any grammar mistake?

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    Choose a natural disaster

    What is the idea of using red block letters?

    Have a space after a full-stop or question mark, not before. End all sentences with a full-stop.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 16-Oct-2017 at 11:11.
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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    Choose a natural disaster

    I too would get rid of the upper case and the red- it makes things hard to read.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 16-Oct-2017 at 11:11.

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    Re: Choose a natural disaster

    Welcome to the forum.

    I have changed your thread title so that it is unique and relevant to the thread. (Also, your original title was ungrammatical.)

    Before we continue, please follow the advice in posts #2 and #3, and use the Edit Post facility to change the upper-case to lower-case and put the whole post in black.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Choose a natural disaster

    Quote Originally Posted by Anita55555555 View Post
    Hi! I'm preparing a final project for ESL students. I'm not a teacher yet. Could you give me a hand? This will be the task for the students:

    Task:
    Choose a natural disaster. Design an infographic. Include advice on what to do if the disaster happens in your city.


    Are there any mistakes?
    Not anymore!
    I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.

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    Re: Choose a natural disaster

    I would say:

    This will be a task for the students.

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