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    mxghanavati is offline Just Joined
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    Cover letter

    Would you please help me to edit my cover letter?

    Dear XX
    I would like to express my deep interest in Senior Control Research Engineer position at YY Company.
    My name is ZZ, and I am close to earning my Ph.D. in Control engineering from AA University. I have a strong background in MPC, Optimal, and Robust control. My research expertise is related to Robust Model Predictive Control, and my works have been published in several IEEE journal and prestigious Conference papers such as designing a robust model predictive controller for a population of TCLs, which is published in IEEE Transactions on Control System Technology. I believe my education background and my three years' experience in the industry make me a good fit for this position.
    My resume, which is enclosed to this email, provides additional information on my background and qualifications. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible to arrange a time for an interview.
    Thank you for your consideration.

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    Re: Cover letter

    Say:

    Would you please help me edit my cover letter?

    And:

    I would like to express my deep interest in the Senior Control Research Engineer position at YY Company.

    And:

    My name is ZZ and I am close to earning my Ph.D. in control engineering from AA University.

    Also, say:

    several journals

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    Re: Cover letter

    I wouldn't use "deep interest". It sounds odd to me. You're just writing to express your interest in the position.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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