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    A Malaysian Movie, You Mean the World to Me.

    Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

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    Sunny is a filmmaker who has fallen unto hard times. He returns to his hometown of Penang to make a movie about his dysfunctional family, a story marked by one particularly traumatizing event he witnessed as a child. That event caused him to bear resentment towards his family, especially his sister, his mentally challenged elder brother and his mother. As he struggles with financial problems as well as his own guilt while making the film, Sunny learns the true value of family.

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    Sunny, a filmmaker who returns to his hometown, Penang to shoot a film about his family. Facing financial challenges, Sunny is confronted by the truth of his family and learns to accept the past.

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    Re: A Malaysian Movie, You Mean the World to Me.

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaya87 View Post
    Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

    Long summary

    Sunny is a filmmaker who has fallen unto on hard times. He returns to his hometown of Penang to make a movie about his dysfunctional family, a story marked by one particularly traumatizing event he witnessed as a child. That event caused him to bear resentment towards his family, especially his sister, his mentally-challenged elder brother and his mother. As he struggles with financial problems as well as his own guilt while making the film, Sunny learns the true value of family.


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    Sunny, a filmmaker, who returns to his hometown, Penang, to shoot a film about his family. Facing financial challenges, Sunny is confronted by/with the truth of about his family and learns to accept the past.
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