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    When the manager came on the stage

    I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct.

    When the manager came on the stage to tell the audience that the lead actor was sick and would be replaced by a young, promising actor, he was met by jeers and calls, "Fraud!"

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    Re: When the manager came on the stage

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct.

    When the manager came on the stage to tell the audience that the lead actor was sick and would be replaced by a young, promising actor, he was met by with jeers and calls, shouts of "Fraud!"
    See above. I'd probably use "his announcement" rather than "he".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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