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    A Chines Movie, Once Upon a Time

    Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you

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    Bai Qian, a goddess and monarch from the Heavenly Realms, is sent to the mortal world to undergo a trial to become a High Goddess. There, she meets Ye Hua, with whom she falls in love and marries. However, when an old enemy reappears in her life, everything she holds dear becomes threatened. What is the reason behind this threaten?

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    A goddess falls in love with a human while undergoing a trial in the mortal world. Soon, an old enemy reappears to threaten everything that she holds dear.

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    Re: A Chines Movie, Once Upon a Time

    Delete the last sentence in the first one.

    threaten - put in jeopardy; endanger

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