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    robin lee is offline Member
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    made changes

    Are there any grammar errors?

    I have to move out of my apartment by November 30, 2017, therefore I have made changes to my work schedule. My work days are XX, YY and ZZ. I apologize for the short notice.

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    Re: made changes

    Quote Originally Posted by robin lee View Post
    I have to move out of my apartment by 30 November 30, 2017, therefore so I have made changes to my work schedule. My work days are will be XX, YY and ZZ. I apologize for the short notice.
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    Re: made changes

    I'd leave November 30 as is. As a BE speaker, I favour 30th November​, but there's nothing wrong with the original.

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    Re: made changes

    There's one less comma with the "30" in front.

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