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    Bassim is offline VIP Member
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    After a massive earthquake

    I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct.

    After a massive earthquake destroyed the majority of homes in his neighbourhood, Michael shoved great generosity and opened his home for a half dozen families in need.

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    Re: After a massive earthquake

    He showed great generosity. It's more natural to open one's home to someone.
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: After a massive earthquake

    Do you say "opened his heart "to" or for"?

    Is it correct to write this:

    John went to church and opened his heart to the vicar.

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    Re: After a massive earthquake

    I'd say "the majority of the​ homes".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: After a massive earthquake

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    Do you say "opened his heart "to" or for"?

    Is it correct to write this:

    John went to church and opened his heart to the vicar.
    Yes, it's correct with "to".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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