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    A Japanese an animated movie: Doraemon the Movie 2017

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    To beat the midsummer heat, Doraemon transports Nobita and his friends to a huge iceberg floating in the South Pacific. The group happens to find a mysterious golden ring in the ice. They determine that the ring was buried in Antarctica 100,000 years ago and head to Antarctica looking for the owner of the ring and come across the ruins of a city buried. They travel back 100,000 years ago and meets Kara who is connected to the ring. The group now must fight for survival as they face a crisis.

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    Doraemon and friends discovered a mysterious ring in the Antarctic that dates back thousands years. When they embark on a quest to find out more about its owner, they discover that Earth may face crisis.

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    Re: A Japanese an animated movie: Doraemon the Movie 2017

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaya87 View Post
    Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

    Long Summary
    To beat the midsummer heat, Doraemon transports Nobita and his friends to a huge iceberg floating in the South Pacific. The group happens to finds a mysterious golden ring in the ice. They determine that the ring was buried in Antarctica 100,000 years ago. and They head to Antarctica, looking for the owner of the ring, and come across the buried ruins of a city. buried. They travel back 100,000 years ago and meets meet Kara who is connected to the ring. The group now must fight for survival as they face a crisis.

    Short Summary
    In the Antarctic, Doraemon and friends discovered a mysterious ring in the Antarctic that dates back thousands of years. When they embark on a quest to find out more about its owner, they discover that Earth may face a crisis.
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