jazizi.zi
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- Nov 1, 2017
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- Hungarian
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- Hungary
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- Hungary
Heyho!
I have fall break now so I was wondering about develope my English skills, so I wrote a journal anouz my dream house. I don’t know if it’s correct or not so I decided to show it to you I’m looking forward to see your corrections. Thank you very much!
Jazz
Here is my essay:
I have never been thinking about my dream house, because I want to be a full time traveler and live in different houses, hostels, maybe in tents. But if I need to choose I would pick an Italian style, colorful house with so called clotheslines.
For the first: I would like it to be on a hill, in a big city or in a small village, for example in Kaş, Turkey, in Oia, Greece, in Shirakawa, Japan or on a border of two countries. The colours of the hard-bricked walls would be goldenrod, olive and salmon. From inside I want the colours be a little bit lighter like aquamarine and yellowfin, becausethen the rooms would seem to be much more bigger. I love watching sunsets and sunrises, that’s why I would have giant windows with light curtains. I would have a big garden which I would grow vegetables and flowers in.
From inside: the house would have at least two floors. On the first fllor there’d be my American kitchen with the living room, one bathroom, the guestrooms with wardrobes and a gym with a treadmill and a stationary bicycle. On the second there would be an artist hall with my musical instruments and painting supplies, three bedrooms and a bathroom. When you’re going to the 2nd floor you would need to take the stairs behind a secret door. On the walls there would be a lot of family photos amd paintings by Van Gogh and me. I would like to have a library on the second which would is larger than any other rooms. The library opens to the big balcony. There would be beautiful view to the town amd of course fresh air because of the mountains.
I have fall break now so I was wondering about develope my English skills, so I wrote a journal anouz my dream house. I don’t know if it’s correct or not so I decided to show it to you
I’m looking forward to see your corrections. Thank you very much! Jazz
Here is my essay:
I have never been thinking about my dream house, because I want to be a full time traveler and live in different houses, hostels, maybe in tents. But if I need to choose I would pick an Italian style, colorful house with so called clotheslines.
For the first: I would like it to be on a hill, in a big city or in a small village, for example in Kaş, Turkey, in Oia, Greece, in Shirakawa, Japan or on a border of two countries. The colours of the hard-bricked walls would be goldenrod, olive and salmon. From inside I want the colours be a little bit lighter like aquamarine and yellowfin, becausethen the rooms would seem to be much more bigger. I love watching sunsets and sunrises, that’s why I would have giant windows with light curtains. I would have a big garden which I would grow vegetables and flowers in.
From inside: the house would have at least two floors. On the first fllor there’d be my American kitchen with the living room, one bathroom, the guestrooms with wardrobes and a gym with a treadmill and a stationary bicycle. On the second there would be an artist hall with my musical instruments and painting supplies, three bedrooms and a bathroom. When you’re going to the 2nd floor you would need to take the stairs behind a secret door. On the walls there would be a lot of family photos amd paintings by Van Gogh and me. I would like to have a library on the second which would is larger than any other rooms. The library opens to the big balcony. There would be beautiful view to the town amd of course fresh air because of the mountains.
