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    When David's father died

    I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

    When David's father died, it felt like an emptiness that nothing could fill. Not a day passed without David reminiscing about the time they spent together.

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    Re: When David's father died

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

    When David's father died, it he felt like an emptiness that nothing could fill. Not a day passed without David reminiscing about the time they spent together.
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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