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    I am fond of children.

    Could you please check the sentences below?

    I am fond of children. I find them loving, innocent and pure. Now, I would love to talk about my best friendís baby girl, whose name is Selena. When my friend was pregnant, she asked me to pick her baby what name I liked. I was looking for a meaningful name for one month. Then finally I decided to choose that name.
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    Re: I am fond of children.

    Quote Originally Posted by ambitious-girl View Post
    Could you please check the sentences below?

    I am fond of children. I find them loving, innocent and pure. Now, I would love to talk about my best friendís baby girl, whose name is Selena. When my friend was pregnant, she asked me to pick her baby what name I liked my favourite name. I was looking for thought about a meaningful name for one a month. Then Finally, I decided to choose "Selena". that name.
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: I am fond of children.

    Are these two sentence OK as well?
    When my friend was pregnant, she asked me to pick a baby’s name I liked.
    When my friend was pregnant, she asked me to pick a baby’s name which was my favourite.

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