Results 1 to 2 of 2
  1. #1
    Bassim is offline VIP Member
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Student or Learner
      • Native Language:
      • Bosnian
      • Home Country:
      • Bosnia Herzegovina
      • Current Location:
      • Sweden
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Posts
    6,953

    When Peter returned home late in the evening

    I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

    When Peter returned home late in the evening, tipsy and stinking of alcohol, and saw his wife standing in the kitchen, he knew what was going to happen next: her long telling-off and pontificating until he dropped off to sleep.

  2. #2
    Tarheel's Avatar
    Tarheel is offline VIP Member
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Interested in Language
      • Native Language:
      • American English
      • Home Country:
      • United States
      • Current Location:
      • United States
    Join Date
    Jun 2014
    Posts
    22,949

    Re: When Peter returned home late in the evening

    That's good, but you might try:

    reeking of alcohol

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •