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    When I fell ill I was left with no flexibility in my spine. I couldn't twist my torso

    When I fell ill I was left with no flexibility in my spine. I couldn't twist my torso at all.

    Please check my sentences.

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    Re: When I fell ill I was left with no flexibility in my spine. I couldn't twist my t

    Quote Originally Posted by tufguy View Post
    When I fell ill, I was left with no flexibility in my spine. I couldn't twist my torso at all.

    Please check my sentences.
    See above. Other than needing a comma, the rest is OK.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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