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    In his memoirs the famous actor

    I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct. I am not sure about the second part of my sentence after "him." I was not sure what punctuation to use and used a comma, but I am not sure if that is correct.

    In his memoirs the famous actor dispels the myth of a caring and kind husband and reveals the dark side of him, as the jealous bully who terrorised all his family.

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    Re: In his memoirs the famous actor

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct. I am not sure about the second part of my sentence after "him." I was not sure what punctuation to use and used a comma, but I am not sure if that is correct.

    In his memoirs, the famous actor dispels the myth of that he is/was a caring and kind husband, and reveals the his dark side of him, as the - a jealous bully who terrorised all his entire/whole family.
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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