When school bell rang

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Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

When school bell rang, students made a dash for the door. Their teacher shouted for them to stay, but soon she was alone in the classroom, staring at the empty chairs.
 

Charlie Bernstein

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Put "the" in front of "school" and "students" and you're there.
 
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