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    immahdis is offline Newbie
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    Unhappy Urgent Resignation Email: Please help me make it sound better/more formal

    could you please help me with my email to make it more formal? I am always awful at formal emails, and this one is very very important. Here is what I’ve written:

    Dear Mr. XXXXXX,

    My apologies for notifying you by email. Further to my conversation with Mr. XXXXX this morning, and his offer for a new position at XXXX, please accept this email message as notification that I am leaving my current position at the airport due to recent issues, and personal reasons. So I’d like to ask for a whole week off, effective from November 14, until November 21.
    Thank you for your understanding of my decision to leave, and all your support over the past 9 months. I wish you all the best for your continued success.

    Respectfully,
    (My name)
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 14-Nov-2017 at 11:12. Reason: Sorted out formatting and standardised font across the post

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    Tarheel is offline VIP Member
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    Re: Urgent Resignation Email: Please help me make it sound better/more formal

    It looks good to me.

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