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    #1

    Need your help to correct this letter

    Hi
    I'm wondering that if someone correct mistakes from the following letter, Thanks I advance.

    Hi Sobi


    As you know that I did some addition hours on weekend for Windows upgradation and in order to adjust those hours Iím planning to take few hours off , please see below schedule for details


    --12-Sep-2017 Not available after 1 pm
    --13-Dec-2017 Not available after 1 pm
    --14-Dec-2017 Not available after 2 pm


    Thanks

    Muzokh


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    #2

    Re: Need your help to correct this letter

    What is the purpose of the letter? Who is the writer and who is the receiver?
    Is it a request to take time off to compensate for working overtime? What do you mean by "not available after 1/2pm?
    Last edited by tedmc; 13-Dec-2017 at 11:19.
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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