Motivation Letter for Study in China (on Scholarship) helpppppp me!!!!! please urgent

[aothong12]

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[teechar]

I was working as IT teacher of computer department in government for last 10 years.

Was that before you got the job at the university?

I have accepted and permission from Lao national university. Furthermore, I feel Knowledge of the master degree not enough Enhancing Professional Development for 21 Century Teachers.

What does that mean? Please rewrite it in plain and simple English.

The details of these all information are described below:

What does that mean?

to enhance my prior android application project successful in Laos.

What does that mean?

Is this your full letter of motivation? Can you not say a bit more about your achievements, academic strengths, and personal qualities?

[aothong12]

thanks for taking time to suggest me to better next time , teacher !!! i try do this better

[teechar]

Thanks for taking time to your suggestions, me to better next time , teacher! I will try to improve my letter. do this better

Great! Show us the new version, and we'll do our best to help.

[Piscean]

helpppppp me!!!!! please urgent

Plese don't use thus sort of chat-speakk exaggeration. Just write Please help me, though there is no need even for that. We are here to help.

Remember, too, that the people who respond here voluntarily give up some of their free time to help learners. They work as quickly as then can to respond to those questions they can help with. Being told that a request is urgent is something they can do without.

[aothong12]

thanks for your suggestion

[aothong12]

not complete with wrte study plan , please step by step.




PHITHONG BOUNVILAY
NATIONAL LAO UNIVERSITY
COMPUTER SCIENCE DEPARTMENT
25/12/2017
Selection committee
Apply for doctoral programs in Hunan University for 2018-2019
HUNAN UNIVERSITY
COMPUTER SCIENCE DEPARTMENT
HUNAN, CHANGSHA
Dear Selection committee:
My name is phi thong bounvilay, I'm from Lao an IT teacher from national Lao university in computer science faculty. I am writing to submit my application in the doctoral program in the computer science at Hunan University for 2018-19.At the same time, I always been thinking about my future, building a career, becoming a successful person and generally finding my own path in the life, and focus on my ambition in life is to become 21st century teacher successful. For that reason, I wish to apply for china scholarship as advertised through CSC website achieving this long-term aim.
Introduction of my background:
over the 10 years, I have developed an innovative approach to teaching and conducting research with undergraduates through creating and presenting course materials in both laboratory and classroom settings. In my experience, the best teaching involves concrete, hands-on examples, so I engage students in my courses by encouraging the maximum laboratory participation possible. The future research project I intend to pursue at Hunan University involves the data mining called "Social Network Analysis. This is a project that I feel will interest and inspire undergraduates while allowing me to continue to produce the highest quality work in my field.
Why do I choose study in china?
Why do I choose study in the Hunan University?
Describe the details of study plan:
First year (2018-2019)
Second year (2019-2020)
Third and Fourth year (2020-2022)
Fifth year (2022-2023)

[Tarheel]

Just two or three things. Start every sentence with a capital letter. The word China is capitalized. Please space between paragraphs.

[Charlie Bernstein]

Thanks for taking time to suggest that. I'll do next time , teachers! I'll i try do this better.

Start sentences with capitals. End with periods, exclamation points, or question marks.

[Charlie Bernstein]

Thanks for your suggestion.

Start sentences with capitals. End with periods, question marks, or exclamation points.