[Grammar] After confirming the strange behavior

[Nikitus]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?


"After confirming the strange behavior of the hobo, who spoke as a totally different person, Tim chose to be direct, to try to help him, since apparently the death of his dog had affected him too much."

Thanks.

 

[tedmc]

Hello,

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?


"After confirming the strange behavior of the hobo (no comma) who spoke as a totally different person, Tim chose to be direct (no comma) [STRIKE]to try [/STRIKE] and tried to help him since, apparently, the death of his dog had affected him too much."

Thanks.

See above.

 

[Nikitus]

Dear tdmc and Piscean: Thanks for your help.

Tim knew the hobo for years. And never the hobo drank and talk in an extroverted way details of his life.

Thanks.

 

[Tdol]

talk in an extroverted way details of his life.

I would use the past tense here and would change details to about.

 

[teechar]

I suppose Tdol meant change "details of" to "about."