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    #11

    Re: Kindly correct/advice on my short story

    Perhaps:

    Nobody knows how hard you are going to work to achieve your goal. Only you know that, and only you know if you have what it takes.

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    #12

    Re: Kindly correct/advice on my short story

    The phrases "helping me constantly" and "helping me endlessly" do not work for me. I suggest that you try something else.

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