An Indonesian Movie, Rafathar

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Gaya87

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Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you

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Jonny Gold and Popo Palupi are professional robbers. They got a job to kidnap a baby named Rafathar, a baby adopted by a wealthy family. It turns out the baby they kidnapped has telekinetic power that is able to control the metal. Hilarious incidents abound in the kidnapping process, until finally the presence of Rafathar has its own meaning to Jonny and Popo. Their journey is slowly beginning to open up a huge conspiracy and the supernatural power of Rafathar.

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Professional robbers Jonny Gold and his co-worker Popo Palupi are entrusted with the task of kidnapping a baby named 'Rafathar' which happens to possess super telekinetic powers that can control metal.
 

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Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you

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Jonny Gold and Popo Palupi are professional robbers. They [STRIKE]got[/STRIKE] get a job to kidnap [STRIKE]a baby named[/STRIKE] Rafathar, a baby adopted by a wealthy family. It turns out the baby they kidnapped has telekinetic power that [STRIKE]is able[/STRIKE] enables him to control [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] metal. Hilarious incidents [STRIKE]abound in[/STRIKE] start happening during and after the kidnapping, [STRIKE]process,[/STRIKE] until finally the presence of Rafathar [STRIKE]has[/STRIKE] acquires its own meaning to Jonny and Popo. Their journey is slowly beginning to open up a huge conspiracy and the supernatural power of Rafathar.

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Professional robbers Jonny Gold and his mate [STRIKE]co-worker[/STRIKE] Popo Palupi are [STRIKE]entrusted with the[/STRIKE] tasked [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] with kidnapping a baby named Rafathar who [STRIKE]which[/STRIKE] happens to possess super telekinetic powers that can control metal.
I don't understand the part in blue.
 

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I don't understand the part in blue.

I want to say that their journey is slowly discovering the truthbehind the baby boy's powers.

Can I say.. (
Their journey gradually reveals a greater machination beyond their initial understanding, and the nature of Rafathar’s superpower.) or just end the summary without the last line?
 
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