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    A Chines Movie. Manhunt

    Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.

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    The journey of upstanding lawyer Du Qiu finds himself being framed for multiple crimes following the death of his female colleague. Tasked to search for Du, detective Yamura starts to chase Du, but when he manages to escape repeatedly, the hard-boiled detective starts to develop respect for the fugitive, and begins to believe in his claims of innocence. Together, the duo then joins forces in pursuit of the truth behind the murder.


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    A lawyer who is unwittingly drawn into a murder case when all the proof at the scene points to him being the criminal, sets out to avenge and find the real culprits, even as the police are on his tail.
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    Re: A Chines Movie. Manhunt

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaya87 View Post
    A Chinese movie: Manhunt

    Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.


    Long summary: Upstanding lawyer Du Qiu finds himself (delete being) framed for several crimes following the death of his female colleague. Assigned to search for Du, Detective Yamura starts to chase him, but when Du manages to escape repeatedly, the hard-boiled detective starts to develop respect for the fugitive (no comma) and begins to believe in his claims of innocence. Together, the duo then joins forces in pursuit of the truth behind the murder.

    Short summary: A lawyer who is unwittingly drawn into a murder case when all the evidence at the scene points to him (delete being the real criminal) (no comma) sets out to (delete avenge and) find the real culprits, even as the police are on his tail.
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