Application to the Tourism Office

[Pham Hoang Quan]

Hi, can someone please check the following letter? Thank you.

Dear Sir.
I wish to apply your weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around my city.
I have been studying at Tourism for three years at Van Lang university. Spending free time every weekend on this job is a best opportunity to get experience required for my assays. Additional, i am a member of English Club. So being a tour guide is a chance to practice my English skill with foreigner.
I have been a member of HCMC Youth Cultural House since i was a child, i have been to many beautiful places with a extensive fascinating history to introduce with the tourist. Moreover I have been living here for twenty four years, so i have known the most delicous foods and the best restaurant in my home town, it is very useful for this job.
I strongly believe that i fit this job, and i hope you will give me a chance to show my skill.
Sincerely

[teechar]

Hi, can someone please check the following letter? Thank you.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I wish to apply your for the "weekend job as a local tour guide" position advertised on www.myabccity.com.vn. showing visitors around my city.

I have been studying at tourism for three years at Van Lang University. Spending my free time every weekend on in this job is a best would be an excellent opportunity for me to get the experience required for necessary in my studies and future career. assays. Additionally, I am a member of our local English Club. So being Thus, working as a tour guide is a would give me a chance to practice my English skills with people visiting our city. foreigner.

I have been a member of HCMC Youth Cultural House since I was a child, and I have been to many beautiful places with extensive and fascinating history to that I can introduce with the to tourists. Moreover, I have been living here for twenty four years, so i have known the most delicous foods and I am familiar with the best restaurants in my hometown. it is very useful for this job.
Given my background, I strongly believe that I fit this job, and I hope you will give me a chance to show my skill.

Sincerely

Yours faithfully,

Pham Hoang Quan

Hello Pham Hoang Quan, and welcome to the forum. See above.

[Pham Hoang Quan]

Hello Pham Hoang Quan, and welcome to the forum. See above.

Thank you so much. I need to try harder.