[Cover Letter] Application to the Tourism Office

[Pham Hoang Quan]

Hi, can someone please check the following letter? Thank you.

Dear Sir.
I wish to apply your weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around my city.
I have been studying at Tourism for three years at Van Lang university. Spending free time every weekend on this job is a best opportunity to get experience required for my assays. Additional, i am a member of English Club. So being a tour guide is a chance to practice my English skill with foreigner.
I have been a member of HCMC Youth Cultural House since i was a child, i have been to many beautiful places with a extensive fascinating history to introduce with the tourist. Moreover I have been living here for twenty four years, so i have known the most delicous foods and the best restaurant in my home town, it is very useful for this job.
I strongly believe that i fit this job, and i hope you will give me a chance to show my skill.
Sincerely

 

[teechar]

Hi, can someone please check the following letter? Thank you.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I wish to apply [STRIKE]your[/STRIKE] for the "weekend [STRIKE]job as a[/STRIKE] local tour guide" position advertised on www.myabccity.com.vn. [STRIKE]showing visitors around my city.[/STRIKE]

I have been studying [STRIKE]at[/STRIKE] tourism for three years at Van Lang University. Spending my free time every weekend [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] in this job [STRIKE]is a best[/STRIKE] would be an excellent opportunity for me to get the experience [STRIKE]required for[/STRIKE] necessary in my studies and future career. [STRIKE]assays.[/STRIKE] Additionally, I am a member of our local English Club. [STRIKE]So being[/STRIKE] Thus, working as a tour guide [STRIKE]is a[/STRIKE] would give me a chance to practice my English skills with people visiting our city. [STRIKE]foreigner.[/STRIKE]

I have been a member of HCMC Youth Cultural House since I was a child, and I have been to many beautiful places with extensive and fascinating history [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] that I can introduce [STRIKE]with the[/STRIKE] to tourists. Moreover, I have been living here for twenty four years, so [STRIKE]i have known the most delicous foods and[/STRIKE] I am familiar with the best restaurants in my hometown. [STRIKE]it is very useful for this job.[/STRIKE]
Given my background, I strongly believe that I fit this job, and I hope you will give me a chance to show my skill.

[STRIKE] Sincerely[/STRIKE]

Yours faithfully,

Pham Hoang Quan

Hello Pham Hoang Quan, and welcome to the forum. See above.

 

[Pham Hoang Quan]

Hello Pham Hoang Quan, and welcome to the forum. See above.

Thank you so much. I need to try harder.