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  1. Member
    Student or Learner
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Cambodian
      • Home Country:
      • Cambodia
      • Current Location:
      • Cambodia

    • Join Date: Dec 2005
    • Posts: 115

    Exclamation edit my cover please

    # 3EoE1, Street 281, Sangkat
    Boung kok I, Khan Toul kok,
    Phnom Penh, Cambodia
    E-mail: [email protected]
    Mobile phone: 012 365 454


    [email protected]

    Dear Sir or Madam:

    I would like to be considered for the Finance Assistant position which your company advertised in the August 10th on the world vision website

    I graduate from National University of Management (NUM) with a Bachelor’s degree in Accounting. Also, I had graduated from Battambang Language Skill Center (COERR). I utterly believe that my knowledge in the areas of Business Administration, Principal Accounting, Intermediate Accounting, Financial Management, Financial Statement Analysis, Computers and other skill as detail in my curriculum vitae would be an asset to your organization. During my studying period, I worked in group, researched, wrote reports and performed in class about that reports. Therefore, I have a good interpersonal and communication skill.

    My background and career goal seem fit to your requirement well. I am confident that I can perform the work effectively and efficiently.

    At your convenience, I would appreciate your giving me the opportunity to discuss my qualifications in person, and I would be happy to come for an interview at your convenience. I can be reached at mobile phone: 012 365 454.

    I look forward to hearing from you soon.

    Yours Sincerely,

    E Sophea

  2. Editor,
    English Teacher
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      • Native Language:
      • British English
      • Home Country:
      • UK
      • Current Location:
      • Japan

    • Join Date: Nov 2002
    • Posts: 71,237

    Re: edit my cover please

    I graduate from National University of Management (NUM) with a Bachelor’s degree in Accounting. Also, I had graduated- thew tenses are wrong here for me- I am a graduate of... and ...
    I utterly believe- same crticism as in the other letter
    other skill as detail- same
    interpersonal and communication skill- skills
    seem fit to your requirement- meet your requirements
    At your convenience,- delete the first
    at mobile phone- by

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