Erbab
Member
- Joined
- Aug 22, 2016
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Turkish
- Home Country
- Turkey
- Current Location
- Turkey
I will be grateful If you can correct my mistakes in my motivation letter.
''Dear Sir/Madam!
I am an undergraduate student at the mechanical engineering department of Karadeniz Technical University. I am also studying electronic engineering within a double major programme. I would like to express my interest in doing a traineeship at your company as an Erasmus student for this summer.
At Karadeniz Technical University, I got 3.74/4 GPA in 150 credits in mechanical engineering and 3.27/4 GPA in 18.5 credits in electrical and electronic engineering. The courses of Engineering Thermodynamics I-II and Hybrid Power Systems that I took during my education have given me a strong theoretical background in energy applications and made me eager to improve my skills in this field. I am not asking for a paid position; I just want to learn something from you and broaden my skill set.
While working the Envar Architecture, I was able to apply my 3dsmax knowledge to the architectural design. I took part in modelling, texturing, lighting and rendering stages of the process and gained experience in exterior and interior design. So, I want to combine my engineering knowledge with my architectural experience to be able to develop self-sufficient sustainable life units with renewable energy technologies.
I would value the opportunity of being part of your internship programme. I am sure it would enrich my future studies and strengthen my career prospects.
Thank you very much for considering my application, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Erbab ''
Thanks for your help!
''Dear Sir/Madam!
I am an undergraduate student at the mechanical engineering department of Karadeniz Technical University. I am also studying electronic engineering within a double major programme. I would like to express my interest in doing a traineeship at your company as an Erasmus student for this summer.
At Karadeniz Technical University, I got 3.74/4 GPA in 150 credits in mechanical engineering and 3.27/4 GPA in 18.5 credits in electrical and electronic engineering. The courses of Engineering Thermodynamics I-II and Hybrid Power Systems that I took during my education have given me a strong theoretical background in energy applications and made me eager to improve my skills in this field. I am not asking for a paid position; I just want to learn something from you and broaden my skill set.
While working the Envar Architecture, I was able to apply my 3dsmax knowledge to the architectural design. I took part in modelling, texturing, lighting and rendering stages of the process and gained experience in exterior and interior design. So, I want to combine my engineering knowledge with my architectural experience to be able to develop self-sufficient sustainable life units with renewable energy technologies.
I would value the opportunity of being part of your internship programme. I am sure it would enrich my future studies and strengthen my career prospects.
Thank you very much for considering my application, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Erbab ''
Thanks for your help!
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