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  1. Newbie
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    #1

    Post Information request email ‎

    Hello ‎ I’m new here in this great community ,‎ I am facing a small (not very small) problem in letter writing, so I’ll be here more often.‎ I wish if you could give me some tips, and correct my writings and my emails into the right way.‎ This is an email about requesting information about a machine i wish if you could take a look on it . " Dear Mr My name is Yazan , I’m an Engineer , Currently I’m doing my master degree in NC University.‎ My main area of study is the Electrical components of the machinery ,‎ And recently I’m working on a seminar about the Sensors in Machinery,‎ And one of the machines that I’m going to talk about is your machine kl252 .‎ I wonder if you can provide me with respectable information about the sensors system in the machine Thank you for your assistance.‎ Cordially,‎ Yazan "

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    #2

    Re: Information request email ‎

    Quote Originally Posted by yazan 1 View Post
    Hello.I’m I'm new here in this great community. I am facing a small (actually, it's not very small) problem in letter writing, so I’ll I'll be here more often.‎

    I wish if you could hope you can give me some tips, and correct my writings and my emails. into the right way.

    This is an email about requesting information about a machine. I wish if hope you could can take a look on at it.

    Dear Mr [surname]

    My name is Yazan and I’m I'm an engineer. Currently, I’m I'm doing my masters degree in at NC University.‎ My main area of study is the electrical components of the machinery,‎ and recently I’m I've been working on a seminar about the sensors in machinery.And One of the machines that I’m going I want to talk about is your machine, the KL252.

    I wonder if you can could provide me with respectable reliable information about the sensors system in the machine.

    Thank you for your assistance.‎

    Cordially Yours sincerely,‎

    Yazan
    Welcome to the forum.

    Please see my corrections above. You seem to have a problem with creating an apostrophe with your keyboard.

    It is important to follow these rules of written English at all times:

    - Start every sentence with a capital letter.
    - End every sentence with one appropriate punctuation mark (we don't end sentences with a comma).
    - Always capitalise the word "I".
    - Don't put a space before a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.
    - Always put a space after a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

  3. Newbie
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    #3

    Thumbs up Re: Information request email ‎

    Thank you very much teacher.
    I will try my best to follow these rules.

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