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    sania-baharat is offline Member
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    Enthusiastic and self-motivated Linux System administrator

    Could you please check the following as a "Profile" in my resume?

    Enthusiastic and self-motivated Linux System administrator with a strong performance background in wide variety of professional system support and solution-based IT services for Linux Systems or administrations including monitoring, configuration, troubleshooting and maintenance of operating systems.

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    emsr2d2 is offline Moderator
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    Re: Enthusiastic and self-motivated Linux System administrator

    That is a very long sentence! I would add "a" before "wide variety".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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