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#1 01-Mar-2018, 21:29Enthusiastic and self-motivated Linux System administrator
Could you please check the following as a "Profile" in my resume?
Enthusiastic and self-motivated Linux System administrator with a strong performance background in wide variety of professional system support and solution-based IT services for Linux Systems or administrations including monitoring, configuration, troubleshooting and maintenance of operating systems.
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#2 01-Mar-2018, 21:31Re: Enthusiastic and self-motivated Linux System administrator
That is a very long sentence! I would add "a" before "wide variety".
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.
