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    Motivation Letter for Master Degree Maritime Operation

    Dear friends, please revise my motivation letter
    Many thanks in advance for your attention.


    Undoubtedly, The European Union is not only the world’s director of acknowledged place in maritime business, but they are also the master innovation and modern technology in the maritime industry which is my major interest for perusing a Master’s degree study in abroad. I have discovered the joint Master’s degree program in Maritime Operation between ABC University and DEF University. After researching the program's information, I am extremely impressed that they offer the study courses for operational and managerial knowledge in the maritime industry that I have always wanted to accomplish in the field.

    I earned a Bachelor degree in Naval Architecture and Marine Engineering from GHI University, and I usually ranked among the first-place students in my class. After graduating I worked for almost seven years in Technical Service Engineer and Naval Architecture. During this time my work in several companies focused on finding creative solutions that involved starting with ships’ drawings, calculating strength, selecting materials, determining ship hydrostatics and stability, planning the process of production and working with sandwich structures and fibreglass materials. I also had good experience with managing manpower and schedules, as well as optimizing work in relation to customer requirements. This employment offered me constant stimulation to improve my work and acquire more knowledge. However, much as I delight in the details of planning and engineering described above, I still need to further develop the managerial skills which are so important to the professional goals which I have.

    My goal is to develop proficient leadership and management responsibility in a wide range of maritime activities, and I feel that this program is well-equipped to further my professional growth. Three courses particularly interest me: Philosophy of Science (Research Design and Methods), Scientific Approach to Complex Problems and Quality and Risk Management. I am hoping that these and other courses will help me toward a bright future and that my knowledge and professional experience meet your requirements for acceptance into the program. For those reasons, I am interested in applying for the master degree program in maritime operation ABC University in autumn semester 2018.

    In conclusion, I am confident that enrolling in this program will supplement my current skills in science and technology with vital knowledge about management skills, and I trust that my talents will prove to be a credit to your school. If I can answer any further questions please let me know.

    Thank you for giving this application your serious attention. I look forward to a positive reply from you.

    Yours sincerely,
    CT
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    Re: Motivation Letter for Master Degree Maritime Operation

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    Undoubtedly, the European Union not only leads the world in maritime trade, but it is also the hub of innovation and modern technology in the maritime industry, and that is my main motivation for pursuing a master’s degree such as the Master’s in Maritime Operation run jointly between ABC University and DEF University. After researching the program's information, I am extremely impressed particularly with courses on operational and managerial subjects in the maritime industry.

    I earned a bachelor's degree in Naval Architecture and Marine Engineering from GHI University, and I consistently ranked among the top students in my class. After graduating, I worked for almost seven years as a technical service engineer and in naval architecture. During this time, my work in several companies focused on finding creative solutions that involved starting with ship drawings, calculating strength, selecting materials, determining ship hydrostatics and stability, planning the process of production and working with sandwich structures and fibreglass materials. I also gained useful experience with managing manpower and schedules, as well as optimizing work in relation to customer requirements. That gave me an ongoing incentive to improve my work and acquire more knowledge. However, much as I delight in the details of planning and engineering described above, I still need to further develop the managerial skills which are so important to the professional goals which I have.

    My goal is to develop proficient leadership and management capability in a wide range of maritime activities, and I feel that this program is well equipped to further my professional growth. Three courses particularly interest me: Philosophy of Science (Research Design and Methods), Scientific Approach to Complex Problems and Quality and Risk Management. I am believe that these and other courses will help me in my future career.

    I trust that my qualifications, knowledge and professional experience meet your requirements for acceptance into the program. For those reasons, I am applying for the master's degree program in maritime operation at ABC University for the 2018 autumn intake.

    I am confident that my talents will prove to be a credit to your school. If I can answer any further questions please let me know.

    Thank you for giving this application your serious attention, and I look forward to a positive reply from you.

    Yours faithfully,

    Charles Taylor

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